If I may, a suggestion:<div>At the moment it's quite a long story with, in my opinion, no really clear message. For crowdfunding I would keep it shorter</div><div>-introduction to the base, as is</div><div>-what we need from the reader, really short: money! ( if they want to know what we will do with the money, point them to the wiki, and put the current explanation there. Perhaps only generically mention that the money will go towards the basic camp structure, tools and food/ingredients) also mention any extra money made during OHM will be used for FHB at future events.</div>
<div>-rewards</div><div><br></div><div>After that invite people to play a more active roll and join on mailinlist/ wiki/ irc, etc<span></span></div><div><br></div><div>As this is a proposal for a rather big change, I wanted to discuss it here first. What do you think?<br>
<br>On Saturday, June 15, 2013, Frantisek Apfelbeck wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div style="font-size:10pt;font-family:bookman old style,new york,times,serif">
Hi to all,<br>I have done some editing of the crowd sourcing proposal, now the ball is on your side. I did not do too much on the second part, mostly worked on the bullet point etc. <br><div><br></div><div><a href="https://pads.mwfc.info/p/foodhacking" target="_blank">https://pads.mwfc.info/p/foodhacking</a></div>
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<span>I hope it helps, I will do more costing today, I would like to finish the workshop/lunge model and costing the same applies to the washing facility. The cold room has to wait
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<span>Sincerely,</span></div><div style="font-style:normal;font-size:13.3333px;background-color:transparent;font-family:bookman old style,new york,times,serif"><br><span></span></div><div style="font-style:normal;font-size:13.3333px;background-color:transparent;font-family:bookman old style,new york,times,serif">
<span>FAA<br></span></div><div> </div><div>Frantisek Algoldor Apfelbeck<br><br></div><div>biotechnologist&kvasir and hacker</div><br><br><div><a href="http://www.frantisekapfelbeck.org" target="_blank">http://www.frantisekapfelbeck.org</a></div>
<div><br><br></div><div>"There is no
way to peace, peace is the way." Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi<br><br> <div style="font-family:bookman old style,new york,times,serif;font-size:10pt"> <div style="font-family:times new roman,new york,times,serif;font-size:12pt">
<div dir="ltr"> <hr size="1"> <font face="Arial"> <b><span style="font-weight:bold">From:</span></b> "<a href="javascript:_e({}, 'cvml', 'mwfc@foodhackingbase.org');" target="_blank">mwfc@foodhackingbase.org</a>" <<a href="javascript:_e({}, 'cvml', 'mwfc@foodhackingbase.org');" target="_blank">mwfc@foodhackingbase.org</a>><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> Lurwah <<a href="javascript:_e({}, 'cvml', 'lurwah@gmail.com');" target="_blank">lurwah@gmail.com</a>>; Frantisek Apfelbeck <<a href="javascript:_e({}, 'cvml', 'algoldor@yahoo.com');" target="_blank">algoldor@yahoo.com</a>>; Evina Steinova <<a href="javascript:_e({}, 'cvml', 'evincek@gmail.com');" target="_blank">evincek@gmail.com</a>>; <a href="javascript:_e({}, 'cvml', 'perpetual-tripper@wwelves.org');" target="_blank">perpetual-tripper@wwelves.org</a> <br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Thursday, June 13, 2013 7:08 AM<br> <b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Crowdfunding primer :)<br> </font> </div> <div><br>Hej,<br><br>my day job took more of me than I hoped but I finnally started to wrote<br>
the crowd funding text. It is very
basic and everyone is invited to help!<br><br><a href="https://pads.mwfc.info/p/foodhacking" target="_blank">https://pads.mwfc.info/p/foodhacking</a><br><br>Cheers,<br>mwfc<br><br>PS: register your account in the wiki <a href="https://foodhackingbase.org/" target="_blank">https://foodhackingbase.org</a><br>
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